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KubaPako Gość		Wysłany: Pią Sty 13, 2012 2:39 am Jako pracę domową mam za zadanie odpowiedzieć na taki list: Dear Ms Kellaway I am writing to your blog as I would very much like your advice on a personal issue. Three years ago I resigned as a manager and since then I have thoroughly enjoyed more meaningful leisure activities such as gardening, fishing, writing and so on. However, lately, I have been concerned that my utopian existence is no longer sustainable, so I went to see a recruitment agency. When I explained the past three years to one of their staff, he looked completely shocked. I fear any future employer will react similarly. How should I present my current circumstances and curriculum vitae to best effect at the next interview? Yours sincerely MB Unemployed, male, 41 A oto moja odpowiedź: Dear Sir, Thank you and I hope that my advice would be helpful. Your resignation of the manager was very unreasonable. If I were you I would explain that the reason for leaving the job was to collapse after the death of a loved one. At the interview you must demonstrate that already figured to yourself and you want as soon as possible to return to work. Yours faithfully, Lucy Kellaway Proszę o wskazanie błędów

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marchefkka newbie Dołączył: 27 Gru 2011 Posty: 23		Wysłany: Pią Sty 13, 2012 6:38 am - my advice WILL be helpful NIE would - your resignation from the position of manager... - was A collapse (? moze nie za dobre slowo) demonstrate that...??? o co chodzi z tym figured? moze... that you have dealt with your problems and... - and you want to return to work as soon as possible

KubaPako Gość		Wysłany: Pią Sty 13, 2012 5:48 pm - was a collapse (tutaj chodziło mi o traumę, ale nie wiem jaki jest odpowiednik tego słowa w angielskim) - you must demonstrate that already figured to yourself - musisz pokazać że doszedłeś już do siebie (w sensie że po tej traumie, załamaniu)

marchefkka newbie Dołączył: 27 Gru 2011 Posty: 23		Wysłany: Sob Sty 14, 2012 12:09 am slowo figured w ogole tu nie pasuje moze byc np you must demonstrate that you have already recovered after this difficult experience - slowo collapse jest ok, moze predzej bym uzyla mental breakdown albo chociaz okreslila collapse - mental collapse (was a mental collapse after...)

KubaPako Gość		Wysłany: Sob Sty 14, 2012 1:04 am Dzięki za pomoc Pozdrawiam

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