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Emmigrant is a person who leaves his country in order to
leaves, most frequently in order to secure better living conditions. Immigrant life is not easy. At the beginning must obtain permission to work outside the country. To work in a foreign country is necessary to know a foreign language (usually English). Migrants often leave their families at home which leads to family problems. They must deal with the longing for family. Migrants sometimes have to deal with a negative attitude to them locals.
migrate. Migrants must acustom to new culture. Summarising the work of emigration is very difficult and less profitable.
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Emmigrant is a person who leaves his OR HER country in order to
leaves,
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In order to leaves? Nie ma sensu.
most frequently in order to secure better living conditions.
Znów "in oder to" - unikaj powtórzeń
Po prostu "to", wywal "in order"
Immigrant's life is not easy. At the beginning, such a person must obtain permission to work outside the country. To work in a foreign country, it is necessary to know a foreign language (usually English). Migrants sometimes have to deal with a negative attitude of the locals.
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