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Wysłany: Pią Paź 28, 2011 10:16 pm

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Hi John!
How are you? Sorry for late reply, but I was on holidays.
I was in Russia with my best friend. He name is Tom. He is young man from the Polish. We live in one town.
It holiday were successful. We met many very interesting people. I think, that we understood their culture. It was great. We visited a large part of Russia and not only. We arrived to Mongolia. We wanted to go to China, but our savings ran out. We had to go back.
In next holiday we go also. Could you go with us? It would be great. You like to sleep in tent, so you will have a great time.
Unfortunately, the school year started. Much time is left until the next holiday.
Greetings for you.
XYZ

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Dear John,
Thank you for your last Letter and for Christmas present which you sent me.

I am very happy, because Christmas time is still approach. What i like the most in this time, is a magical atmosphere? All people are polite, understanding and helpful. I perform some preparation, for instance: cleaning a house, beating a carpets, decorating the Christmas tree. Unfortunately I still must do a lot of indispensable things. I haven't bought for my friends and family yet. I need to prepare all dishes and decorations. I will spend Christmas with my parents, brother, grandmother, aunt and distant cousin of my mothers, who comes from Australia. We will eat the supper together.

Anyway, that? Is all for now. Thanks again for your letter and fantastic present. I hope you will enjoy Christmas time. I am looking forward to hear you.

Greetings for your parents.
XYZ

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Hi John,
Thank you for invitation on common trip. I'm sorry, but I can't go. I do not have the money. I lost all my savings in a casino. It is a small problem. When I come back from the casino, I crashed my porshe. I do not come by train. There is a dirty and stinks.
I invite you to me. You can arrive in March.
We can visit local casino. There is excellently.
You must see Kraków. This is a beautiful city. Later we will go over the sea. I propose to Trójmiasto. There are a lot of beautiful places. Unfortunately, there is cold. You should take warm clothes.
Greetings for you,
XYZ

Wysłany: Pią Paź 28, 2011 11:05 pm

Mam jeszcze jeden.

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Dear John,
Thank you for your last Letter. Why do you want to come to Poland? Do you want see Kraków?
If you don't know, I know it. You must see Kraków. This is a beautiful city. Later we will go over the sea. I propose to Trójmiasto. There are a lot of beautiful places. Unfortunately, there is cold. You should take warm clothes.
I propose go a bike ride. We can go by a small towns and villages such as Bachowice, Biedaszki, Chabielice, Doły, Frydrychowice, Gaj Koniemłocki, Grabownica Starzeńska and Janów Podlaski.
I will help you a organise accommodation and I borrow you a bike.
You wanted to see photos. I will send in next mail.

Greetings for you.
XYZ

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