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Gość		Wysłany: Wto Sty 03, 2012 5:58 am ‘’Little Britain’’ commercial TV show produced by BBC.This controversal comedy present parabolical overstate of character traits, habitions and celebrites lifestyle. Firstly homosexual tendency are theme of taboo ,as the rejection we observe movement of gey,lesbian who are fighting for the right of merry and acceptation of their realationships.We can easly notice diverse of polish society which is devided into two groups : people who are inveterate Catolic and perceive this partnership as sickness and people who don’t eliminate this way of life style.One of the epizod from Little Britain presents similiar situation, the British president made a conversation with black advisor which seemed to be gay.This plot is unacteptable for Polish people ,so it is one reason why this comedy shouldn’t be performed in our TV station.What’s more majority of population discriminate black people,most of the jokes are based on deriding this group of people.It can be connected with uniform society,black raice are perceived as dealers and people who gathered a gangs.Nextly this TV show has specyfic humour, without difficulties offends goverment,church,public institutions.It illustrate that British society has distans to themselfs not like Polish people whose could feel offended by performing grotesguely social faults :alkoholizm,obese.To sum up Polish society interprets a comedy too serious so if the little britain will be performed in TV a lot of problems could emeraged.

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Radziq Gość		Wysłany: Sro Sty 04, 2012 8:38 am "Little Britain" is a commercial TV show produced by BBC. (chodzi o tytuł czy zdanie? Jeśli zdanie trzeba pamiętać o jakimś czasowniku;) This controversial (!) comedy presents (!) parabolical overstate ?? (a może wide variety w znaczeniu"duża różnorodność&") of character traits, habits (!) and celebrities' lifestyles. Pamiętaj o akapitach:) robi się wcięcia albo przerwy między wierszami. tu bym dał nowy akapit Firstly (a może "generally speaking"jako że w tym akapicie nie odwołujesz się bezpośrednio do tego filmu a raczej do sytuacji w naszym kraju) homosexualism (moja sugestia) is a taboo subject (!)(theme of taboo to raczej kalka polskiego:) in Poland (to moja sugestia). We observe the rejection (może discrimination??) of gays (!) and lesbians (myślę że tu lepiej byłoby w l.mn.) who are fighting for their right to (!) merry and for acceptation of their relationships (!).We can easily (!) notice diversification (!) of Polish (!) society which is devided into two groups : people who are inveterate Catholics (!) and perceive this kind of partnership as sickness and people who don't discriminate (moja sugestia) this way of life style. (Tu bym dał akapit) One of the episode (!) from "Little Britain" presents similar (!) situation. (tu bym postawił kropkę) British Prime Minister ) (jako że w Wlk. Brytanii nie mamy prezydenta) made a conversation with black advisor who (!) seemed to be gay. This plot would be (moja sugestia) unacceptable for Polish people, so it is one of the reason why this comedy couldn't (moja sugestia) be performed in our TV station.(a Ruch Palikota I Anna Grodzka?? nasze społ. ewoluuje chociaż trzeba przyznać że rzadko widać Grodzką w mediach, ciekawe czemu;)) What's more the majority of Polish (moja sugestia) population discriminates black people. Most of the jokes are based on deriding this group of people. (możesz coś nadmienić o polskich stadionach) This situation (moja sugestia) can be connected with the phenomenon of (moja sugestia) uniform society where black people (moja sugestia) are perceived as dealers and the ones who create (moja sugestia) gangs. (Tu bym dał akapit) Secondly (jako że wcześniej było firstly:) this TV show has specific sense (!) of humour. (tu bym dał kropkę) It easily (moja sugestia) offends government, church and public institutions. It illustrates (a może "shows") that British nation has distance (!) to itself not like Polish people who(!) could feel offended by watching (moja sugestia) grotesque (!) social faults like alkoholism (!) or obesity (!). (Akapit) To sum up Polish society could (moja sugestia) interpret such a comedy too seriously(!) so if "Little Britain" was (!!!) performed (albo "broadcasted") in Poland (moja sugestia) a lot of problems could emerge(!). (pamiętaj o trybach warunkowych:)) Bardzo fajny temat poruszony. Może by Ci się udało to jeszcze rozwinąć? Tylko uważaj na literówki I gramatykę. (!) Oznacza że była literówka lub jakiś inny błąd. Być może wszystkiego nie dostrzegłem gdyż poprawiałem w nocy lekko zaspany:) Mam nadzieję że będzie 5 Pozdrawiam W razie pytań mój mail: radswi@tlen.pl Radek

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