Baardzo proszę o sprawdzenie i ewentualne poprawienie błędow;)
I would like to talk about Anna whom I met when I was a child. She was my neighbour for six years but unfortunatelly she had to move out. Now, she is my close friend.
Physically, Anna is tall, slim woman in her teens. She has a thin face which is framed by a mass of long black hair and sparkling grey eyes show her humour and friendliness. She prefers wearing sport, comfortable clothes. Anna has a wonderful pesronality. She is very sociable. She loves going to parties. She also had a great sense of humour. Anna often tells jokes and then she laughs till she cries. I've never seen her cross or sad. She is kind-hearted and also cooperative. She always helps me when I need it. She is interested in classical music and biology. She spends a lof of time in her garden. She also likes singing and dancing.
Anna is very important in my life and I hope that our friendship will be never end.
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Wysłany: Sro Lis 16, 2011 5:14 pm
Generally it's ok. However there is one mistake (in the last sentence). "I hope that our friendship will be never end". It should be : (...) will never end.
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Wysłany: Sro Lis 16, 2011 5:55 pm
i powinnotam jeszcze być She also HAS a great sense of humour zamiast She also had a great sense of humour
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