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tina93
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 Wysłany: Pon Lis 07, 2011 11:11 pm |
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Mam opowiadanie na angielski :
Temat: Napisz opowiadanie którego ostatnie zdanie to " Wszystko dobrze
sie skończyło, ale wolałabym nie myśleć o tym jakie mogłyby być tego
konsekwencje"
Proszę o sprawdzenie i poprawienie tego opowiadania:
All holiday I was spending in the capital of USA, in
Washington, because I visited my uncle Johny
and I was traveling in America. That was amazing vacation, but when
the holiday finished I must come
back to Poland. My uncle and me were going to the airport in Washington.
He told me: 'I hope that you will come back in the USA on next year'
I was very happy, that he invited me again and I exclaimed:
'Oh, great I want come back here'
Next, I bored to the airplane.
I will never forget this strange flight. As soon as we set
off I was slepping, but I woke up when the air host was exclaiming:
'Sience please!
We have a problem with landing. Please take off your shoes and don't panic!'
I was afraid about my life. Itried to call my family, but I couldn't .
I sat with ill man. He had got a chcickenpox, and all the time
he coughted. All people were holding hands. I was feeling dreadful. I
thought that 'the sooner, the better!' This was the worst idea
in my life.
Suddenly I felt the plane falled down. I closed the eyes.
Withis seconds I realized that we landed on the river.
Everybody claped their hands. People were screaming. We waited until
fair brigade were helping us. Pilot
was amazing. If we hadn't landed on the river, the plane would have
crashed. It would be a huge disaster.
(teraz to ostatnie zdanie: wszytsko dobrze sie skonczylo....)
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enga2000
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| Wysłany: Wto Lis 08, 2011 6:57 am |
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I spent my whole holidays in the capital of USA -
Washington. I went there to visit my uncle Johny. During the residency I was travelling around America. That was amazing adventure, but when
the holidays have finished I had to come
back to Poland. My uncle and me were going to the airport in Washington when he told me that he hoped that I would come back to the USA in the next year.
I was very happy, that he invited me again and I exclaimed that I would be back for sure. Next, I went into the airplane.
I will never forget this strange flight. As soon as we set
off I fell asleep, but I woke up when the air host was shouting:
'Silence please!
We've got some problems with landing. Please buttonup your seatbelts, take off your shoes and don't panic!'
I was afraid about my life. I tried to call my family, but I couldn't , because it's impossible wen you're aboard.
I was sitting with ill man. He had got a chcickenpox, and
he coughted all the time. All of the people hold their hands each other. I felt dreadful. I
thought that 'the sooner, the better!' This was the worst idea
in my life.
Suddenly I felt the plane was falling down. I closed my eyes.
I realized in a second that we had landed on the river.
Everybody was clapping their hands and screaming. We had been waited until
fair brigade helped us. Pilot
was amazing. If we hadn't landed on the river, the plane would be
crashed. It would be an enormously disaster.
(teraz to ostatnie zdanie: wszytsko dobrze sie skonczylo....)
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